Japanese' English

Recently I'm reading some books and one of them about English. The auther is Japanese woman but she seems to live abroad.

Ah, I forgot the title but it's about the difference of the way of thinking between Japanese and English. By comparing the reports which are written by Japanese college student and the student who uses English as mother tongue, she points out the week point of Japanese' English. She doen't remark about the grammar but that stlye. (I suppose it's better to show the examples written in the book but I already return that. So I can't do now.) Well, the conclusion is if you write, about a certain topic which is given in the exam or disccussion), objective or subjective. Japanese' is subjective and English speaker's is objective. Reading those examples, I found the difference easily. For me, I'm Japanese, Japanese student's one is easy (in grammer) to read. And I also felt it "sounds" similar to mine and got tired of reading because of that point.

Most Japanese students, of course though the students are not only Enflish learner in Japan, use "I" a lot. They tend to start from "I". She mentions it's cause of Japan education and Japanese language. We all Japanese learned the writing way that we write and express our own feelings or experienses; for example, about the books we read (during summer or winter break), school events, and so on. And more, Japanese sentense doen't require having subject necessarily. So Japanese students get used to write objective.

And about the style of reports. When English speaker read Japanese' English, they don't seem to understand what the conclusion is in that. I can't explain well...but the theory applys to mine, too. Japanese' English is like a spiral. I mean, like "agree→but→even though→agree"... But English speaker's is directly.

Hmm, I got tired thinking about those, haha. I'm really Japanese. What do I want to say...? Hm, just telling the reason why Japanese' Engilsh sounds childish.